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I woke up to loud banging. Someone was hitting the bas to the cages. I sat up and rubbed the sleep out of my eyes. Somebody slide a tray of food into my cell through a gap in the bars. I crawled up to it. The food liked like green mashed potatoes mixed with week old soup. I tried some and it tasted terrible. I still ate it though.
I finished my food and then I lay back down. I was about to fall asleep, when a police baton hit the bars on my cell. I sat up. "You're wanted," the security guard said. I stood up. He opened the cell. I walked out and saw that Espeon, Growlithe, and Mightyena were being dragged along as yell. We walked down the hall and went through a set of double doors.
There were metal walls everywhere. Occasionally we saw a window. There wasn't much going on in them right now. We got to the end of the wall and went into the last door on the right. When we got inside the room, the others were handcuffed and brought into another room. I looked around and saw a couple of scientists and a lot of security guards.
The security guard behind me pushed me forward. I stumbled and walked farther into the room. The security guards walked me up to a table that was slanted. The forced me to sit on it. The removed my shirt and pushed down onto the cold metal. I shivered from how cold it was. The security guards strapped me onto the table.
A scientist walked up to me. He was holding a needle. "Don't worry," he said. He injected whatever was in the needle into me. "This is going to hurt a lot." I cringed. I suddenly felt a searing pain in my chest. The pain kept getting worse and worse. My arms suddenly started to get really itchy in some places.
I looked at my arms and saw black fur growing in. Yellow rings formed around my wrists. They appeared to be glowing. I felt more fur growing on my legs. My finger nails started to become longer and turn into claws. The pain was growing unbearable. I started to shout because of the pain. I felt my ears becoming pointed and longer. They slid up to the top of my head. My eyes started to burn for a few seconds.
The pain finally started to go away. The security guards unstrapped me from the table. I landed on the ground and fell over. I stood up. I saw a mirror and I didn't like what I saw in it. Fur had grown on my body in patches. I looked myself over and saw more yellow rings around my ankles, my ears, and one in the middle of my forehead. My eyes had turned red and my hair had turned black.
I ran my hands through my hair. A security pushed me towards the door. "It's time for your hour outside," He said. He pushed me out of the door and took me through the hall but turned left right before we went back into the cell block. I was pushed outside. I had to cover my eyes from the bright sunlight. I smelled the fresh air and it never smelled better.
I heard the door open behind me. I looked and saw the others come outside as well. They were no longer in handcuffs. Mightyena retreated from the sunlight. He sat in a dark corner and fell asleep probably. "Hey," Espeon said. "You look really nice!"
I smiled. "Hey," I said back. Growlithe looked me over than ran over to the grass and started to roll around in it.
"An Umbreon. Nice."
"Thanks." I looked around and saw the other inmates eyeing us. "What are they looking at?"
"Us. They don't like us. A few of them have tried to attack us." She sighed. "People are so untrusting." I looked at the humans again. I sighed and started to walk. I wanted to get some exercise before I was forced to come back inside. Espeon started to follow me. "So what are you thinking Umbreon?" she asked.
"Excuse me?"
"Well you are an Umbreon, so I want to call you something." I smiled.
"Well I just want to know how long before we can get out of this dump."
"Well, we got a note from some people a few weeks ago. It told us to escape when we become full Pokémon. Then it had specific instructions on where to go to become human and/or get our memories back." I smiled at thought of being able to escape. My tail started to wag. That was when I realized that I had a tail. I looked at it and I smiled again.
"Being part Pokémon isn't as bad as I thought it would be," I said. Espeon looked at me, like she knew what I was talking about. We reached the edge of the fence.
"Hold up. The fence is electrified." I stopped. I decided to lie down in the grass. Espeon lay down next to me. We just laid there for our hour outside. We heard a whistle and stood up. We walked back to the door and went inside. Growlithe and Mightyena were already in their cells. We were put in ours.
"We'll need to use you more soon," one security guard said. "Your transformation isn't complete." I glared at him. He laughed and walked away. The rest of the day went by without much happening. Later that same day, we were taken to the same lab again. This time, it had four tables, one for each of us.
We were strapped to the tables. "This one will be much more painful than the other ones," the same scientist from before said. We were each injected one at a time. First Growlithe, then Mightyena, then Espeon, and I was last. Growlithe started to yell in pain. We all started to yell in pain. They unstrapped us from the tables. We hit the ground and our full transformation started.
Cliffhanger ftw. I really liked this chapter. I hope that the transformation scene was written well. Don't insult me!
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corbynprower Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
it was a nice TF scene hehe
wiiking9 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
Thanks! :D
corbynprower Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
np ^.^ it very nice
wiiking9 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
I'm on the third part right now, and i'm not sure if i did a good job on that transformation scene. It just didn't feel as good. And thanks again.
corbynprower Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
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